Flights of Fancy

good visual novel :) art and music is good too :) just sometimes the writing style makes it difficult to read correctly

Wow, this got way more real than I expected. I was never in similar position as Bee, but the endings on being found out were still quite striking. The one with friends finding out maybe the most of them all, as I just felt how soulcrashing it would be in real life (although it felt a bit out-of-character for them to be this cruel?).

I really liked the style of narration, the feelings of detachment and confusion were really well conveyed. My favourite ending was the fujoshi fanclub – I guess I just enjoy people being weirdos together and sharing their hobbies. :D

So, wow... This was really good, even better than reading Limbokin made me expect. And that title. ^^

Hi. I greatly enjoyed the game, I think it was really well done.

Bee was a great narrator, her emotions felt and internal conflicts felt so real and relatable. She was a great character overall.

My favorite ending was head in the clouds. It was so cute and it really portrays her inner struggles very well. I just wish she had ended up telling Vida, but it was still great.

Overall, the only thing I can as criticism is that I wish it was a little longer and some of the endings more fleshed out, but I still really loved the story.

Thank you for making this :) Great work.

Despite not having a sprite of her own, Bee has a personality and I appreciate that.

I actually liked the "Mom finds out" ending best, it was the first I got and the abruptness of it was a little shocking. When other "X finds out" endings followed I got the feeling the game has the potential to explore how it might feel for someone queer to fear being discovered, and things like that.

Also, I tried to tell Vida but was cut short XD, I wish that was a real option.

Perhaps a more readable font could help people get engaged more quickly.

Liked the game very much <3

gonna play this game and see how it goes

What did you think of Bee as a narrator?

Bee is good narrator.

 Being teeneger is not easy BUT 
It's hard to be the only one gay person in strict family, I guess. Especially when even you don't accept this fact. 

Her "ailment" making her  day-dream a lot is very interesting too. 

What was your favorite ending?

"Head in the clouds". The CG was very cute. They'd be great couple if they'd dating. But it'd would require Bee to disocver her sexual orientatation, make coming out and confess to her feelings. 

I like games with a lot of choices, routes and a lot of endings (including bad ones). i didn't get all the endings but probably none of the is satisfying end of Bee's story. Maybe you should create next part?

Any other questions/feedback?

I don't know why but BGs add stong depressive vibe to de game. The are too gray, weathered and devoid of colors. You could find better ones or draw them by yourself or find someone to do it. They are the biggest flaw of the game.

You should work on choosing better angles of BGs to look good with sprites.  It looks bad.  Some of them don't even fit to the first-person-view.

Interesting characters with interesting personalities. The story is a bit lineal

I realy like the UI. Sprites are good. 

Dialogues are ok, a bit chaotic but ok. And unusual font doesn't help with reading. Especially if someone has dyslexia (I don't). I know, you wanted it look like hand-writed but you could find something "more readable".

Most of the scenes are ok and more-less well-written but some of them are a bit too-daring (in example Bee's dirty fantasies).

What did you think of Bee as a narrator?

I recognize her as what literature teachers call an "unreliable narrator" because of her internalized homophobia. It does not make me dislike her, though. 

What was your favorite ending?

FanFiction.Net. Probably because I'm a bit of a writer myself and related to the "find someone who understands me through my writing" part. 

Any other questions/feedback?

The art caught my attention while I was doing my "scour Itch for the latest VNs" session. 

I also liked the glossary bit, since I decided to collect VNs that offer deliberate cultural glimpses. It's nice to find one from my own country.

The writing is also pretty good. It feels more deliberate than other VN scripts. 

It was a little hard to get into the anime bits, though. Maybe write less in "complete" sentences in order to convey Bee's emotions? I find her reactions to the anime more important to the story and easily more engaging compared to her narration of the anime. 

I appreciate your treatment of Bee's sexuality in the context of a conservative culture. Sensitive but from the perspective of someone who's affected by the culture herself.

I consider this game to have a good replay value. A number of the endings have to do with being "out". While repetitive, they're far from redundant. They emphasize a point and I think players like me could see the point clearly: The concern of getting "outted" without your consent is recurrent. They're everyday situations with high stakes.